So were you there? What do you mean re "preamble" and what does more professional look like?
No, were you?
Preamble is their opening line which has been reported as being "From the little information we have, it appears that..."
To go to something like this, you need to be confident and fully prepared in order to provide little option but for the WNC to take your version as an accurate/credible account.
That opening line indicates that The Trust know that they want to oppose/object to something to do with the WNC/NTFC, but don't really know what. There is no substance or credibility to anything that they have said after that. A distinct lack of the 6P's principle.
The current statement/notice is like a schoolkid going to the Headmaster complaining that someone has pinched something or hasn't played by the rules for something, that they are not entirely sure what has been pinched, or what rules they haven't played by and then expecting the Headmaster to get them back or adhere to those rules that they are not sure of.
